Thursday, October 29, 2009
Brand
Thursday, October 22, 2009
Mid term writing test
To begin, my partner and I decided to make a survey on phobias because we though that younger person age 18-30 had less knowledge on phobias.A person can only be diagnosed of phobia if his fear is unreasonable and persistent, even if the object of his fear is not around.A phobia is a really complex mental illness and we cannot blithely say that we have one. However, my partner and I choose for our thesis statement that younger people had less basic and also general knowledge on psychological oiliness such has phobias. In order to prove that our statement was true we created two groups of people. The first group contained people aged 18 to 30, and the second one people aged 30 and over. We based our criteria on ages and both of our respondents were either males or females. We though that age was one of the most important factor of knowledge.
Even though There are others important factors the age seemed to be the best options for us, the age factor makes ans important distinction.
In second, our result was quite a schock, we seriously underestimated the first group, people age 18to 30. My partner and I created questions that were very understandable for both groups.The first question was <
In third, my partner and I have underestimated group number one , people age 18 to 30, we though that they did not have a lot of knowledge on phobias. When we written our thesis statement, we had in mind that phobias was to stereotyped and misunderstood. It is true that we all have fears however a person with phobia becomes extremely anxious when he is placed affront of the object of is fear and even when he is not placed affront of it. For instance , my partner and I knew already a lot on phobias and psychological illnesses. We both knew the particular characteristic of a person with phobias and the factors. In the survey, most of the possible answers were true. A phobia can be caused by internal and external events such as a trauma, heredity and genetics factors. People with phobias can also be cured by association techniques and many others treatment involve medication.So every possible answer were true even though we modified the answer in order to get a more affective and precise result. Somehow, younger people did have enough of basic knowledge on phobia and psychological illnesses.For many reasons , younger people have and easy access to documentation and information. Internet which is the easiest way to access and collect information's all around the world , must be the biggest factor in this accessibility. Although the responses from group number two was the one we expected, our thesis was mislead.We should have not only considered the age factor, we should have also considered the technical evolution factor.
In conclusion, The reason why we decided that phobia would be our topic presentation, was that my partner and I had a lot of knowledge on phobias.Overall, we though that phobia was a misunderstood psychological illness among the younger people.Well , phobia is a misunderstood psychological illness because many people blithely talk about common phobias.However our thesis was mislead because we took the age factor to base our thesis statement.Obviously we considered only one main aspect in our survey, we should have considered the technical evolution and also the Internet factor. Internet is very useful, it is a very fast way to access documentation on almost everything.Some people were born while Internet was being widespread. Our respondents in group number one were mostly young people born with Internet in their houses, and they access to it almost every day.We should have consider the technical evolution factor to place our decision and to base our thesis.
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Wednesday, October 14, 2009
Formative work 3: Grammar practice 1
2. Difficulty : In general the test was well adapted to the level of College students, I cant say that it was hard. The questions were quite simple , although the answers were sometimes hard to find. I hesitated A a few time before submitting my results however, I was intellectually stimulated while doing this test.
3. What I learned: At first, I learned that my biggest weakness in grammar was punctuation. I also learned how to place a semicolon in a sentence, and when can you use it. Moreover, I learned how to place comma in a long sentence . And finally, also learned when to write with a capital letter in the middle of a sentence.
4.My score: 26/40
5 . Course rating: I rate this course 5/5, it wasn't hard and I only failed one section which was punctuation. I am not saying that I'm glad about it, well I'm just happy that I didn't failed the whole exercise.Writing is a very important tool and it is very useful in every days life, so I will continue practicing. I enjoyed doing this test, it was very revealing to me , and now I know what skills I need to improve.
Formative work 4: Writing diagnostics: Sentence Structure
1. Interest level: I was very motivated this time, so I decided to improve my grammar skills. The test wasn't so hard, however I enjoyed doing it , it was very helpful. Even though I have a few issues in writing, I do believe that the LEL courses will help me.
2. Difficulty : Like I just mentioned, I was surprised that this exercise wasn't hard compared to some others that I've done. Surprisingly, I did not fail this one , even though I have issue in writing . Certain sentences structures were kind of difficult , but it was only because they were new to me.
3. What I Learned :At first, I certainly ameliorate my writing skills and I am also aware of my weakness. I also learned many different ways to structure a sentence , and tips to find my own writing style. Moreover I learned that you need to be comfortable with you writing technique in order to write a Strong and affective sentence.
4. my score: 27/40
5. Course Rating: I rate this course 5 /5 , I was very interesting , useful and overall totally helpful. I think that I should try all the exercise in grammar, and practice until I get very strong. I think that this test really pointed out the weaknesses of many students , and it was also adapted to the students needs. And finally, I realised that I need to use this useful tool which is the LEL , in order to improve my skills in English.
Tuesday, October 6, 2009
FORMATIVE WORK 2; Reading skills diagnostic2 : informal text
2.Difficulty: Yes all the text contained mature content and were very well detailed. It was a little bit hard for me to answer a few of the questions, however I understood the main idea of each texts.I have to admit that those learning task are kind of hard but helpful in many ways.
3.What I learned: I learned how to understand the main ideas of informal text , its not an easy thing to do.I also learned many new vocabulary word and expressions , and I've also learned a few historical facts.
4. my score :19/30
5.Course rating: I rate this course 5 stars! I know it might sound awkward ,before I was saying that those self-learning tasks were hard , it true.But I somehow enjoy self-learning task and I really feel that I am ameliorating myself. Also, I now consider the express library an indispensable element for all students because it is very useful.